Creepy Pasta: Iron Picky

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Name: Iron Picky


C.P Group: "The Black Order" 


Nickname: The curse iron rail road ghost


Age:23 ( but looks 17 still)


Height: 176cm tall


Appearance: ( like this zalgosdemure.deviantart.com/ar…)

(He may looks scary , been can quite never wrecking and  scary. Especially is he chase after you trying to kill  you , he'll jump scares ,just to get your heart really racing.)


Per: Dense mind , southern boy but no manner and formally, mind set is still suck in 1800's  so he obverse to modern day stuff. Modern Technology  just confusion him. Honest and fair kind of guy and loves challenges 


Likes:old fashion things, trains (set,rails), collecting souls to build the train truck he never got to finish when he was alive.


Dislikes: Modern day stuff and trying to under stand it


Back Ground: During the 1800's gold rush ear , a young prospector head to C.A to tried to find gold.After failing to  do so he diced to become a prospector. But he realized  the dangers involve in mining he diced to try something less life threatening. So he deiced his hands at being a rail road  builder, but one while working on the rail work. He accident hit an exposition in bedding in the ground, cause 2 irons rods to go though him. One in the eye and the other in his heart. He was instance kind and few days later many more workers started die and in rapid numbers many people begin to suspect it was curse. All claims were ignore  by corrupted money bagging CPO of the rail track , just care on about his money. On big grand opening day of rail way with  thousand worker and there families in all , board the train to ride it on it first and last debut. An un seen accident happen in the train flew off the train exposed and everyone on boards was killed,Many years later after that unfortunate accident Iron picky came back as c.p ghost, but was not finish working at the rail just yeti. Or was the fact that die so suddenly that he doesn't realized that's he's dead yeti. An  he just when crazy over the years, blood trust crazy. Even though he kills anyone his self , the  spirit train does that for him.
He lure's people on to the track to tried to play a little game/challenge. Walk along the track with out being catch by him and your free to go and get little treasure at the end of track. Get caught once and Iron picky  lets you tried again , get caught a 2nd time her rope you and tear if you escape , get caught a 3rd time and her go full scary rage mode. Put in near death states and make sure never leave the train track alive again.


Killer Quote: "You can't run from old Iron Picky" "I find ya"


Powers:His was once like any other ghost. But over the year as he become madder and madder. With  his insanely he forgot his ghost original. trust the only power he has is  ghost teleporting and summon his evil living Halloween spirit train. When that train killed a person they either come back and a ghostly rail road worker or just become part of the never ending line of tracks.


W.O.C: He will used any cowboy Iron weapon such as (skull) pistol ,  hammer and wooden nail , pick axes , iron Cain....etc. Another most of time it just the gun and the pick axe..some time very little though here used and iron chain ball 
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